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Cyndy R's avatar

One of my favorite lines.... "A bowel-born blasphemy, a growling moaning call, pushed out from the gasses of organs buried in its belly, belching the sounds of men who had perished, many men, deaths of agony whence the soul had stolen away already and the body itself died abandoned and lonely."

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𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐔𝐋𝐓𝐑𝐀 𝐎𝐁𝐒𝐄𝐑𝐕𝐄𝐑's avatar

The chapters are getting better each week Forrest. The imagery and the significance of the journey is great. Like I said above, I really love that line among other sentences and paragraphs. Super creative. Also I have to say - Go Meeta! Love the timing of this doggo. The name given is so brilliant as I also loved your tale telling intro of this one very much, love the correlation!

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